Ya. I also had issues with the rhyming. Glad u posted. Stay active man. Best tip for u at this stage is to read other people and feed. It will come back to you. It will also help u. Find a writer u enjoy reading. Learn from what u see. Apply it in ur own unique way and expand.
This was cool. Was digging it mostly until it got a little biblical. Tye tabernacle shit really tossed me off.
Keep postiNHg
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