personal trainer w/ iron swords & hatchets, put corpse in caskets
let Defined his family all shredded like they signed up for the total package
[seems like it should be done already but i've never seen it. fresh wp nice connection]
horrid battle record. kill & bury u in a mausoleum entryway wall
took 10 years to join the 20/20 club, now your going straight to the hall
[this is okay. light tho]
ya hoe aint worth the 5 dollars she charged after poundin that ass
so threw her out my car w/ $3 and said the Fiat to include a gallon of gas
[i actually like this. smooth delivery. wp was okay. funny]
challenge he has is which male lover to fuck first & swallow seeds
hence the reason he has problems with Meniscus he's always on his knees
[forced to me. delivery is getting stale. same bar every time it seems]
i'm at a strip club with women around doing obscene things
u'd rather a Guidance for u, while he's moving ur hand down his g-string
[forced again imo. didn't like it anyway tbh]
see we battled b4, shattered ur jaw so bad was afraid to log in
already Puncture bitch ass, this match is just the nail in the coffin
[more than likely an old wp but it hit to me and can't recall it offhand]
ur bff caught ten from a pgf.. thats firearm with target-tracking accuracy
my precision-Guided Tore Through Temple, like it was part of campus faculty
[im going to forget this bar exists]
actually his dad's bi. Guess Jeans dont skip a generation as before
nasty whores. i got this win in the back pocket, ya got a man's hand in urs
[didnt like the concept]
nothing's off limits. everything i Airfare game so lets talk more..
cuz ur moms pussy has a mind of its own, her Pilots everyone on board
[weak connection to me. set up was a stretch]
ur doing too much of the same thing. switch it up a bit. ya delivery is smooth but the wp gets old fast. stale. some cool bars tho
vs
Concepts 8 years old, come on who u tryna kid w/ bars fag
If life is a journey, yours is a time machine to the top 10 punches of a david lama mag
[rhyming was off. kills the impact right away]
Il murder this fag, rip out his insides n grind his brains
N finally give him a spotlight battle, w/ 10 of those tryna find his remains
[this is definitely played]
Old hush n orc battles Is how this gayboy rehearses
So when he goes out on a limb, its only w/ one of neighbors verses
[ok. relevant hit. light tho]
Dudes a tramp, people only wana see u stand there at range
If home is where you lay your hat, yours is flat, on the street w/ a handful of change
[ok again. another light one]
ugly as fuck, we know the bitch who u going home tonight is
When I clown ya girl its just scratching the surface, like u do to her dermatitis
[this is better. fresher/creative. altho a cliche]
Never getting props, everyone here would pound ya view
Ya verses we dont just mark ruffalo, we hope the hulk can spend a round w/ you
[rough or low? i see it.. just a stretch]
This guys a faggot, if he even sees a girl this flop is walking
Bitches so much, dudes are known to popinjay regularly just to stop you talking
[didnt dig this one]
Ya girl would rather anything else, dont mean to be a prick her sir
Photo of u 2 is such a sight of sore eyes, shes letting muff take a pic w/ her
[wtf was that set up. punch fell short]
Coulda made this battle legendary but your pure luck in this thin
Have no problem breaking the box office for you, w/ 1 kick to the carboard u do your business
[old here]
the rhyming one syllable needs to stop. ur battling 10 years surely u can rhyme more than one syllable. it rly hurts the effectiveness of ur punches. some okay relevant hits but no real standouts
v. jilti
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