[UnbornBuddha]

A very similar picture to ours, even more reflective. Anyways this will be brief, due to the nature of time constraints.

NYCSPITZ: Ah! the late sixties to seventies. A time of great change, political discourse, and, of course, unconventional teachers who went against the grain. But with action comes consequence, as the story portrays. I especially liked the way you ended it. Honestly, I did find the story a bit dull, but you did it well, and the language was executed at a high level.

Certain: Hodgkins lymphoma is quite an intricate disease, especially the indolent ones, particularly seen in the Non-Hodgkin's variety of lymphoma. Anyways, I enjoy the various angles that were utilized, in order to peer into another's account. Another factor I enjoyed was that I never felt like I was reading a rap, it literally felt like reading a regular story, and regular in a good way. I also enjoyed the approach more than NYC's.

However, I do think NYC is the victor here, mainly on the basis that his writing while a bit less captivating, in terms of content, had the more impressive writing, to me at least.

Vote: NYCSPITZ