Nyc: Right out of the gate your flow is much more impressive than Certain’s. It was really fucking good. What I usually I don’t like about your writing is your content, but this week it wasn’t about samurais which made it much better. Good stuff.
Certain: The ending of this was perfect, really there’s not much I can nitpick and say was bad about this overall. I liked the descriptions of everyone in the verse painting the picture of the old man instead of describing the old man for forty lines or so. It was different, and very cool.
When I vote I usually vote for the flow just because I like reading shit that flows well, but Certain’s story of describing a character by describing everyone else was pretty damn impressive. For creativity alone, I give it to Certain. Good battle, guys.
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