ok whoever set this match-up bravo, both of your styles compliment each other, i felt like i was reading some 18th century shakespearan poets haha. anyways my break down
Split,
this was easily my favorite verse i've read thus far. when reading it it felt more like someone was just casually talking then a dat dat dat.. dat dat dat.. dat dat dat.. ect repetitive monotone reading. it was elegant, it was insightful, it was reminiscent of my youth. bravo sir, just bravo.
juxtaposition,
i really liked the story and i definitely chuckled at a few parts (teacher line especially) and the way you told it also read off pretty natural, my only problem is that i felt you forced a few parts.. for instance the "find" line and thang line also. i think you could have reworded those portions because pretty much the reat of it was perfection.
again a great battle, i have not really been dissapointed with anything ive read this week. i feal like a pawn on a chess board of kings lol. anyways my vote goes to split. keep bringing the heat guys.
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