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Old 04-26-2015, 01:30 AM   #9
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Originally Posted by jilti View Post
personal trainer w/ iron swords & hatchets, put corpse in caskets
let Defined his family all shredded like they signed up for the total package
>k
horrid battle record. kill & bury u in a mausoleum entryway wall
took 10 years to join the 20/20 club, now your going straight to the hall
>meh
ya hoe aint worth the 5 dollars she charged after poundin that ass
so threw her out my car w/ $3 and said the Fiat to include a gallon of gas
>very meh
challenge he has is which male lover to fuck first & swallow seeds
hence the reason he has problems with Meniscus he's always on his knees
>wordplay stretched but I liked the concept otherwise
i'm at a strip club with women around doing obscene things
u'd rather a Guidance for u, while he's moving ur hand down his g-string
>lmaoo
see we battled b4, shattered ur jaw so bad was afraid to log in
already Puncture bitch ass, this match is just the nail in the coffin
>good
ur bff caught ten from a pgf.. thats firearm with target-tracking accuracy
my precision-Guided Tore Through Temple, like it was part of campus faculty
>lame
actually his dad's bi. Guess Jeans dont skip a generation as before
nasty whores. i got this win in the back pocket, ya got a man's hand in urs
>ok but pretty similar to Guidance
nothing's off limits. everything i Airfare game so lets talk more..
cuz ur moms pussy has a mind of its own, her Pilots everyone on board
>dec



18 lines. @Defiant
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Originally Posted by Defiant View Post
Concepts 8 years old, come on who u tryna kid w/ bars fag
If life is a journey, yours is a time machine to the top 10 punches of a david lama mag
>lol
Il murder this fag, rip out his insides n grind his brains
N finally give him a spotlight battle, w/ 10 of those tryna find his remains
>nice
Old hush n orc battles Is how this gayboy rehearses
So when he goes out on a limb, its only w/ one of neighbors verses
>hahaha
Dudes a tramp, people only wana see u stand there at range
If home is where you lay your hat, yours is flat, on the street w/ a handful of change
>tough concept to make work well but ok
ugly as fuck, we know the bitch who u going home tonight is
When I clown ya girl its just scratching the surface, like u do to her dermatitis
>na
Never getting props, everyone here would pound ya view
Ya verses we dont just mark ruffalo, we hope the hulk can spend a round w/ you
>?
This guys a faggot, if he even sees a girl this flop is walking
Bitches so much, dudes are known to popinjay regularly just to stop you talking
>nope
Ya girl would rather anything else, dont mean to be a prick her sir
Photo of u 2 is such a sight of sore eyes, shes letting muff take a pic w/ her
>k
Coulda made this battle legendary but your pure luck in this thin
Have no problem breaking the box office for you, w/ 1 kick to the carboard u do your business in
>word
this is tough to call. If I had to do bar vs bar it'd be

defined
guidance
puncture
pilots

vs.

lama mag
spotlight
limb
box office

initial read I had Defiant with a few solid punches up front. 2nd I had jilti, thought Defiant's misses were worse. I think both verses are about even in terms of overall quality, I thought Def had a better start and Jilti had strong middle section. both had 2 punches that were pretty much the same. say they were neck & neck throughout

If I went overall impact as the deciding factor, I think Jilti took it in a very close one
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