for the most part i love the way you phrase things and describe things. The kind of phraseology that even if it's serious makes me shake my head smirking or laughing because it's creative or provocative. i'm not quoting any right now because there were a bunch. well here's one:
i'll never be the same as circa sometime before.
rhymes are almost always on point. effortless at times, in a good way.
didn't like the word "hopelessly" from a technical perspective, the way things were going. suppose there's a way to shape it.
right after that tho I loved "only natural / highway traffic".
keep it up i enjoy your shit
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