IamBent: Amazing piece. Love the rhymescheme, full of imagery and you're showing a great descriptive ability along with the storytelling alone wich is pretty damn great. The stereotypical booksmart guy definately comes through well in your story and got a fair bit of knowledge in it as well. All in all a solid piece worthy of praise. Can't really find anything I didn't like. 10/10, would read again tomorrow.
Pohfig: My God dude.. Where the fuck does one even start on this? The imagery, the progression of the piece, the several events is described extremely well and the entire verse as a whole is dope as fuck. The rhymescheme, there's not a single thing I didn't like in this verse. It made me smile and chuckle in real life wich I rarely ever do. I bet I can count on one or two hands that has happened. I didn't expect you to be able to stand up to what I just read from IamBent, but you did. I can't find a single thing I don't like about your story either. It's perverse as fuck and it stays extremely vell on topic and the last 10 lines had me laughing. Vivid as fuck.
Vote: How the fuck does one vote on this shit? Both of the verses was top notch. Probably the best battle I've read in ages, it's my favourite battle so far in the league and both of the verses was beautifully crafted.
I'd seriously love Quentin Tarantino to be the director of a short film using Pohfigs script. Based on that alone and how I managed to envision the final thing actually happening in my head as the guns go blazing I'mma have to give my vote to Pohfig.
BOTW. No doubt imo.
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