Innovator: Truly enjoyed your piece. You painted the picture of what magic is extremely well. It was beautiful and crafted well and made me smile a bit from time to time. The men in white suits etc., funny shit. I loved the approach you took, the mechanics was there and the flow was smooth. Kinda expected wizardry shit but instead you delved into the mind of human beings, well done.
Ink: It was a cool verse but kinda depressing. I loved reading about the kids in class shit and it would have been cool to read more about it. Personally I'd like the ''science is cool, I love it, and this is why and where I'm at now'' with more positivity to it. Could have kept it going but instead it was just a man in a white dress doing more or less basic shit in some expensive lab that builds spacecrafts. Personal preferences aside it's a dope verse, the storytelling ability is there, the flow is decent and overall a solid piece with minor gaps here and there in the rhymescheme that I think you're aware of as well.
Vote - Close battle and I enjoyed reading them both allthough my feed for Ink might have stated otherwise. Either way, final vote goes to Innovator.
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