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Old 04-18-2013, 02:32 AM   #15
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Adonis – I relate to this, quite a bit. The malady is very familiar to me.. scarred liver,” inside im fine.”
My demons allow me to be sane... I don’t know many others who could understand that. Golden piece.Great imagery. I don’t think you could’ve made an excuse for the ever-replenished glass of beer sitting next to my double hennessee.. any better than you did today.
Red glare- kicked fucking ass. Yah so, im paralyzed from the waist down.. but HEY! My hands can still hold the child I couldn’t father myself. WOO! Right? Right. I agree. On this occasion, in this instance, perhaps.. it couldn’t hurt to be optimistic.
/v red glare- he nailed his topic a little bit more. Although honestly.. I really did like your verse Adonis. I just feel like..you couldn’t help but be optimistic here. I wanted more negativity. Cheers anyways.
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