Iambent - Glorious rhymes. Absolutely fantastic rhythm. Can’t say enough good about this piece. Googled T. Roosevelt to check out all the references... at that point my brain’s reward system kicked in. it got all tingly. Thank you.
Pohfig- great story here! Excellent character development, impeccable assonance.. really very good. I lol’d at the NWA reference. More of a chortle .. but still, it initiated a physical response. y ou rhyme like a madman. . I have no bits of criticism to offer. You tell a helluva tale.
/v bent – I’m a sucker for historical references, only books I read religiously are historical fictions. So, that gave bent an edge as far as my vote is concerned. I don’t see anything wrong with your verse poh, syllable counts to me were all fine and the longer ones were warranted. I simply liked bents –a little- more this week. So extremely c lose. Thank you both for the time spent writing these. Great battle.
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