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Originally Posted by Sharp
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>word
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>played but good twist at the end
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>lmaoooo lotb
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>nice
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>nah stretched the second line
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Damn dude you definitely improved since the last read. I like what I'm seeing, you just gotta trim it down a *little bit*. Maybe one or two letters every line, nom sayin? That's what I like to see in a verse