you should cut 2:39 to 3:50 and your delivery felt forced after 3:50
Beginning was pretty good but it needed more substance than "my moms a cunt", more bearable than probably 85% of audio posts on this site
Also.
slayed.slaughtered.dead.gone@ that PSA at the end lmaooooooo
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Originally Posted by PancakeBrah
I'm going to start off on a tangent.
when I write, lately, I feel as if I begin by stringing together ambient ideas and concepts, then i realize I'm just typing the words coffee, tawdry, and autumn over and over and over, again, then I pass out dru-
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