what I'm trying to say is it crossed my mind as I lie awake..
'Hi! I'm fake & the dreams we have always find a break'
searching between a crevice, broken hearts, dusted remnants..
reflected Rembrandts, staring into ourselves without a sentence
That was my favorite section. Your were a bit all over the place but I liked how you untangled your thoughts. Cool freewrite, good shit Q
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Originally Posted by PancakeBrah
I'm going to start off on a tangent.
when I write, lately, I feel as if I begin by stringing together ambient ideas and concepts, then i realize I'm just typing the words coffee, tawdry, and autumn over and over and over, again, then I pass out dru-
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