Everything that has been quoted, plus
& I bet this planet's end stays comfortable inside my camera lense
I can't pretend I don't carve rhymes upon the phantom-bench
Etch into every crevice of this castle's spread
Row off into the bottle & get them paddle's wet
Hit it harder than ever
Your drops always ramble without droning on. They flit from subject to subject without jumping too much. I think that you've really zoomed out in perspective for your last couple drops. There was a few slips in wording, but your wording's much better than par for the course. The repetition of various visuals really makes your drops come alive, like "etching" etc.
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Originally Posted by PancakeBrah
I'm going to start off on a tangent.
when I write, lately, I feel as if I begin by stringing together ambient ideas and concepts, then i realize I'm just typing the words coffee, tawdry, and autumn over and over and over, again, then I pass out dru-
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