This battle was pretty dope. Adonis, a mechanically flawless verse, you were really on point, very well written, very strong word choice & a soft poetic-like scheme- at least that's how I call it. The story was very, very good. From the start to the end, you did a great job in presenting your side of the topic in a very different way than what most would present it. And as I mentioned before, your careful selection of words to paint a picture & really drive your story is one of the best I've seen. On the other side of things, Red, what the fuck do take? Your story is probably one of the best ones of the season thus far. You had everything that a great story needs. The way you were able to tie in the topic is just as more impressive. While, your piece wasn't written as cleanly as your opponent, but the story itself held much weight. Adonis' verse would win over most of the pieces this week, but I feel that what RG put together was good enough to get my vote.
MVGT: Red glare.
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