interesting. you've been posting like a motherfucker again lately. i'm always amazed at how much content you continually push out. just as honest criticism i really think you would benefit from putting out less quantity in favor of more quality. your lack of feed on your "horribly titled" pieces may be proof of this.. haha. dope that u gave a shitload a feedback though cause this section honestly needed some life. anyways, this verse itself was strange, agree with cake that alot of seemed random as fuck but it was interesting to see u just put down ur idea's. also i think u could step up ur rhyming complexity and vocab bro. u been doing this a long time. attempt some crazier shit??
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My syllable count approximately a billion, bounce. You cannot compete.
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