this was different, and fun. your rhyming style is pretty cool and unique. the vocab was very original too but the content was really strange, to a point that it came off as totally random shit. again the rhyming was good but the verse itself was just kinda weird. i did like this though because it was fresh and different. and nothing was predictable. so yeah, made for an entertaining read. would be cool to see u fully commit to a theme of some sort and see what you can come up with. stay posting round these parts broseph
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My syllable count approximately a billion, bounce. You cannot compete.
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