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when i sit down to jot thoughts i get lost in the fiction,
caught up in diction to convey a proper description.

my feels. lol this is me everytime i write.


pray to god every day that i'd just be offered forgiveness
(little did i know he didnt even offer existence)
i got a daughter thats physically incapable of laughing or talking
it saddens my heart every single day that i walk in
and see her face in her bed, my little autistic princess
i pause for a minute.. n wonder if she pays for the sins ive commited

that's real as fuck dude.

you're definitely on the right track dude... i've seen you improving mechanically in other pieces, this is the one that stuck out in my mind. i won't give advice, seeing as i think you're still finding your style... you know what influences you wanna take and which you don't wanna, its up to you. but i look forward to seeing you grow as a writer. keep keyin.