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Old 01-25-2013, 02:05 PM   #3
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Man, this was awkward. Normally your drops are better so I'm going to assume you had some goal in mind with this drop. Metaphoric line references? 'Cause I got those. Just the rest felt so forced.

it fits honesty perfectly. Florida breeze,
caught in the surf with me. waving palms align.
a shaky mess in mind that keeps me tied in a hammock of lifelines.
wake up. safety net of cobwebs.

^ my favorite part
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