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Old 03-26-2015, 10:40 AM   #4
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How’s that working out for me?-- the same shit; the same shtick. Whatever my brain spits
I’ll make it fit.

thought this was an interesting view from the writer, on how he is going to reach the readers and wht they expect

..(I)must forgive myself for allowing Pharaohs to become a mere persona.

nice. i like how you emotionally identified your self here. almost became a human being instead of just another 'alias'
good concept


pretty cool. this was a dive into becoming an air breathing, blood bleeding person. i liked this piece for that reason. you basically went from immortal to mortal here
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