This was good. Not much to dissect. Just imparts a feeling everyone can relate to. You use your own nostalgia markers, but they're broad enough the people can relate. A nice little piece of emotion. A dollop, some would say! Also, I read your short story before you deleted it. Very neo-noir. Don't delete your pieces, Zen. That's for losers.
Thanks for the read!
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