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Old 04-17-2013, 10:24 AM   #2
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Short little drop here but nice nonetheless. The second line here was the best line here imo. A kid looking in the mirror and facing a man. I feel like that from time to time lol. It's a story of raising a daughter and the pressures it brings which was the strong point of this piece because I could feel the emotions behind this. Nice man.
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