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Originally Posted by dead man
don't get all fucking sensitive on me now geno
it was an honest observation and i'm sure i am not the only one who shares that feeling.
ask diode for your own subforum if you wanna post 5 tracks a day somewhere other than open mic. you're over here looking like blacklistednews used to be.
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i can dig it. maybe ill do that. sorry to be taking up your space. but tbh man. it felt quite contrary on your behalf to say that i was getting upset, you kind of sounded pretty upset yourself bud. i will consider your opinion though -im easy to get a long with. never had problems with you, and dont intend to open that door now either bro.
well
one door closes, others open, they say
but its only a phrase. a notion we employ to persuade
dope concept. it really is a thought used to find the silver lining.
growing antisocial as the calendar waves
but i'm only reminded when i wake up everyday
i recognized my best friend in a box at his wake
who i pushed away until it was already too late
the worst feeling ever, is sitting beside a dead man/woman at the wake wishing you could change things when you cant and will never have the chance to do it again. sorry for your loss -if this was indeed related with something in your personal life
the good die young, but we will live to be great
i'll visit you later if ever i can escape
waiting for a letter from grandfather's estate
wondering if he would've still remembered my name
resting uneasily on a pillow of space
veiling complexes behind a simpler face
i woke up in a bed on 27th and Drake
chain-smoking trying to burn away the taste
rest in grace. pocket aces in your denim in case
you're drowning in the river with no oxygen tank
struggling to separate dishonest and fake
put them together it's the whole human race. we all relate
outstanding writing in this section, probably had a lot of room to drop thoughts on quotable lines. i am reserving thoughts for further along. sick rhyming schemes and dope wording -as usual, dead man
venom laced, fang to bone. blood cold as a viper
self righteous. today's thread titles are yesterday's cyphers
leave the house. keys, cell phone, wallet and lighter
ill be back when i retire. or feel inspired. either suffices
phew.. this closing line really jumped out at me as sick. just the design of it was intense and made it really dope to read
pressure rises, like nitrous, lion mated with tigress
making mountains out of molecules creating a crisis
halfway nihilist. the other bit's a bit indecisive
it wasn't meant to be like this. her skin was silk, my Godiva
"my Godiva" ....damn -that was sick
messiah. mousse whipped desire, i was taken at once
but it was only a crutch. accoutrement they serve after lunch
or was it lust? it was love. lamentation and liquor
rather faithful for sinners, we channel demons in winter
"rather faithful for sinners" -another sick phrase. this piece is packed with this type of qiytable all throughout and would really shatter the piece if i just qouted them all. so im just pointing a few that really stuck out -such as this. sick
sit for Shiva. 7 days accepting death as the truth
so let me loose. our ancestors are next to recoup
let me loose. play your game like nobody loses
i've written for you many moons, O woman in blue
all want is you. your scent the sound of your voice
but i've come to realize it's not a matter of choice
roll your dice. rolls royce, here's a camry at best
my pride's about the only thing i have to invest
pheww. the whole investment play on words and delivery here was insane. i really wish you would take it to the booth and start spitting this priceless stuff. you would be a brilliant emcee if you could put this all into audio format. i would buy your shit man. its just that dope -no question about it
sit awake and think about which habit is next
consuming us until there's nothing left..
this was another flawless piece man. just pure enjoyment and painless to read. -you could drop a 10 verse thread and i would spend whatever time necessary to read it with material like this. thanks dead man.
peace