Zen! What's up amigo?!
I liked this, it had a brisk pace to it and some nice imagery. It ended on a bittersweet note and all in all felt like one cohesive thought even though it was broken into short stanzas there are reoccurring themes of longing past happiness. I once wrote something to the effect of this about my childhood. I think you hit the nail on the head with your sunshine stanza and all the subsequent Lines, that summed up exactly how I feel reminiscing long gone summers with friends that are too busy to spend time, maybe we'll spend time together in another life.
Good shit here Zen, besides a few repeating words I didn't like (maybe, how) this was nicely presented and written imo. Stirred up some memories
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