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Old 03-17-2015, 01:58 AM   #3
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all i had to do was turn on a good beat
unreal. props.

"well aren't you clever"

that phrase killed me. love it. although i'm not sure what "idiotic measures" means.

"celebrate your independence, someone bring the rockets through"

Structurally this line was great. The first part rhymed well with "2-lines ago", fit in very nicely. And then after the comma the part that ends with "rockets through" i love rhyming that with "knockin' boots" from a phonetic perspective.

And now I must also give props to myself because I might use "phonetic perspective" in my next verse.
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