[Split]

ive voted on this fucker 5 times.

nigma.
good flow, bad wording at the end. some dope quotables in the middle. didnt come together, was more of a rant for me than anything else. i liked how you opened, it really framed your speech but the end lacked that cohesiveness for me

xces.

Bodies as serenely still as leaves discretely conceding to wilt
that was the only low point of your verse^.

i think you needed more of a conclusion than "Checkmate"
i thought you did a decent job constructing the metaphor, but didnt execute it fully.. i enjoyed your descriptions but i thought it needed a stronger narrator

V/ Nigma. related more to his content. very close battle imo good match