Netcees - View Single Post - anyone interested in reading/critiquing an essay I wrote?

oats · 03-15-2015, 01:55 AM

I'd really like to get as many perspectives on it as possible. It's decently long - 3400 words - so, if you are so kind as to read it, I don't expect lengthy feedback or anything, just tell me what you liked/didn't like and why.

I know I've been shitty about leaving feed for a lot of you, so I will gladly give you in-depth feedback for any piece you link me to before you get back to me about my piece. THAT'S MY WORD.

@Certain @Dancake @Vulgar @bane baby @Zen @Pent uP @Diode @zygote @dead man @uh-oh @NYCSPITZ @Eŋg @Witty @anyone and everyone else who might be interested. thanks

03-15-2015, 01:55 AM	#1
oats Steel Cut Join Date: May 2013 Posts: 5,084 Battle Record: 19-10 Accomplishments - OM HOF (2x) Champed - Fight Night LXXXIV - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 79005428	anyone interested in reading/critiquing an essay I wrote? I'd really like to get as many perspectives on it as possible. It's decently long - 3400 words - so, if you are so kind as to read it, I don't expect lengthy feedback or anything, just tell me what you liked/didn't like and why. I know I've been shitty about leaving feed for a lot of you, so I will gladly give you in-depth feedback for any piece you link me to before you get back to me about my piece. THAT'S MY WORD. @Certain @Dancake @Vulgar @bane baby @Zen @Pent uP @Diode @zygote @dead man @uh-oh @NYCSPITZ @Eŋg @Witty @anyone and everyone else who might be interested. thanks __________________ You should be water Last edited by oats; 03-15-2015 at 05:25 AM.