Innovator m- actually the best I've read from u. Good wording and liked the way u brightened up the topic. Thought there could of been more imaginary flare to it. Nah mean. Still good drop.
Ink I liked the story. Great concept but poor execution. Not that it didn't keep me interested but it didn't come together well. I was more interested in the first part of your piece. More exciting and then when he woke up it got dull. Which is what u was saying about his life after going the science route.
Got to go with V/innovator. Ink had a great concept but I think the ending of how his life got boring was boring.
Good battle tho.
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