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Old 03-11-2015, 08:34 AM   #4
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how did you not finish a twelve line piece in one go?

lol DatShitCray

anyway, nik-As always used contrasting things/sayings in his pieces, even the opening couplet here has an element of that (same ish he's done since winning that tourney at LW - yeah i remember that...)

thought the A man line in this was a nice touch alluding to your screenname. there were a couple others that kinda stood out, mostly because of your punchliney battle oriented style like the volumes to me and despite the internet lines

its unmistakably ill nik-A, same style he's used for more than a decade now, which might be what DSRB was referring to but yeah, def not time to put the pen down just yet

keep it moving!
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