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Old 03-06-2015, 07:17 PM   #3
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You have some of the coolest wording on the site, and that makes for some pretty cool lines. There's always a couple of parts that stick with me after I read it.

I want that love-primitive. Morgue stuff,
Alive in the sheets.
^^This was very good. No one here words their shit like this right chea.

God's humor is a nice unfulfilling joke
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We masturbate the goals, learn to toy & tease
^^These were cool, too.

Keep on keeping on, brudda.
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