beats aiight, finding that lil riff or wdeva the fuck it is slightly annoying though
as for the actual track, im not mad at it, not particularly excited about it either
i think you done your thing in terms of story telling, shit was succinct, easy to follow, didnt sound discnnected from the beat n all that
in regards to the delivery, i agree the content of the verse suits it, only problem is, rather than sounding drunk, you sound like you're trying to sound drunk...which i aint feeling, you can hear the inauthenticity but other than that i commend a muhfucka in terms of creativity, its nice
overall, not something i'd bump, but it was cool to me
didnt mind the listen at all
#1 be easy
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