BOTW straight up.
Bent: NICE piece. Had me hooked from the opener. Dope way to open this shit up. As far as the time period I can honestly say that I know damn near nothing about it so I don't know if the references match the period but I'd assume they do lol. Nonetheless without me knowing about the time period you managed to keep me engaged in this piece and finished it off strong. Wonderful writing here.
Poh: Another excellent piece. I think TD described this perfectly in his first few sentences about the concept behind this, and this concept is very original. Nicely done. Some lines were more stretched out than I prefer but it was no biggie because the story behind this kept me engaged so I didn't care about that lol. Great job on this poh.
Overall after reading both pieces I gotta go with Bent but this is definatly BOTW. Props to both.
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