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Old 02-22-2015, 06:08 PM   #3
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we became addicts. I smoking your breath till we turned into ashes.

that was, some outstanding imagery my friend. the smoothness of each word next
each other is just flawless. this was dope. I love that you structure your pieces the wsy you do
makes them feel unique and original at least to me anyway. this one had great creative imagery
in background of your story. and tbh your style is very zen lol. each read no matter the plot
reads like butter milk pancakes yo. dope piece man.
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