[IamBenT]

Nice battle of TOPICALS! How refreshing lol

Objective - Nicely worded, I like the arguments you make, subtle yet strong, some of these lines could have been worded in a more interesting manner and I would have appreciated some colorful metaphors or similies in here so I could get a better picture of what you are coming across with.

You see, its mission discern to a vision of human behavior,

Just didn't like this line, its mission TO discern or what?? threw it off for me.

King Keith - great verse in parts, some parts need rewording and cutting just so it can have some semblance of flow, particularly the second stanza just felt like you were trying to figure out where this was going. When you drop on the Underground Railroad, that was dope, and I really liked the last part by then your voice started coming through and I could see the traces of the KK that was able to match Cereal Killer a while back. Really a solid job on writing a topical verse that's engaging, funny, and thoughtful.

But the what we're interested in is what lies beneath- in various religions known as physical/spiritual hell.

Man I just hated that line, so blah and long, a very precarious way to start, I always feel that topicals gotta grab you by the collar from jump, like a slap to the face, so I pay attention to the deeper knowledge and thought to come.

Vote -King Keith i feel Objective played it safe but could have gone more indepth with looking at why the mainstream is dominant and how it matters on every level, whereas King Keith suffered from some poor execution but had flashes of insight and some dope lines and concepts that I was feeling more.