I've got to be honest, I have no idea what you're talking about. I kept expecting with the constant stops that you were about to go on, well how should I say this? Hmm, that you were about to string together a section of great rhyming, but you never really done that. Not to be a dick, seriously, but it was the same tired concepts and rhymes that I've read or heard a million times before (the devil, nothing's ever enough or good enough, etc.) If it would have been well-written, that's easy to overlook, but honestly it wasn't. You've got a lot of work to do, but keep it up, pimp. Peace.
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