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Old 02-15-2015, 03:11 PM   #8
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as if natural or favourable, in a false paradigm, what’s crazier?
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I see Evil in the world, and what hurts is I may be worse
^Nice.

I’ve an old soul moulded from earth that ancients cut.
Knew amor once, now all a bitch can do is make me lust,
maybe strut, shake her butt, and take this dick in place of love.
^I liked this section, too.

At about the 'wield/zeal' section the flow picked up and never slowed down. This is some cool stuff you got here, brah. I feel allot of these things you wrote about here (especially the lust section), but it's always interesting to hear the same thoughts from a different voice and perspective. This is well written stream of consciousness shit, and I dig it. Peace.
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