ok..so im not going to sit here and break your verse down because tbh honest there is nothing that i would say that would
improve both of your already amazing skills..i mean godam this was a dope battle and i dont know why anyone hasnt voted yet,
i read this one yesterday and today...gotta say still dope as fuck the second time around. dood came in with some of the dopes
imagery ive seen..with some staggering vocab and diction. great stuff man. the story was creative man..taking snippets from
everything and meshing it into one story that fit your vision..dope shit. CDM smae wtih you man the angle you took from thi
some would say is expected but either way this shit was fire man. tbh you talked about alot of things that most people can relate to
who hasnt gone through that shit?..who hasnt played a sport they didnt like and where forced to becuase your parents wanted
to live throught you lol..i mean its a very relatble story and you told it well...great battle. in the i think am go with cdm on this one
both dropped jewels but cdm gets my vote...thanks for the read fellas
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