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Old 01-25-2013, 10:08 AM   #5
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how to describe it - turrets and towers divided
the loudest recorded 27 hours of silence
powdery lines, knowledge is crisis. power is priceless
sour enticement, sweet like virgin meat deflowered for nitrous

great start, instantly had a good flow.. easy to follow, solid multi's with intriguing content.. that's how you start a piece! it was probably the strongest set of lines overall. i wanted you to go in a different direction than you did, cold war/stand off of military power kind of thing. but the rest was good too, kept a consistent flow and showed you have a decent vocab. props dead!
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