CopyPat: I really liked this approach to this topic even though I almost always hate these approaches. You kind of opened up and then clamped back down with the defensive closer. It wasn't funny or anything, but it kept me engaged as you usually do. Writing about writing is never the right choice, though.
dead man: You went and killed it. Probably the second-best verse from you this season that I've read (which is most of them). This topic fit your nitch so well, but you went more directly into storytelling (albeit not in the linear-narrative sense) than you often do. So many lines to quote here, too. Great work.
Vote: dead man
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