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Old 01-07-2015, 08:51 PM   #2
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"Humans are fickle negotiators. Even if you max in at full
you'll have a bone to pick, and an axe in your back or your skull
Invertebrates encase internal marshes - sabbaticals usher
We're so cautious when we walk with our masses of brothers
it's like that uneasy feeling you get when entering a capitol suburb
in contrast to survival instinct driven suspicion Neanderthal's might've suffered"
-Dope.

Cool piece. Nice running metaphor throughout. The beginning seemed to start a little slow but it picked up quickly.
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