I loved this! It portrayed an ambiance, while detailing details that caught the narrators eyes, as he scribed their images into his retinas. Very succinct detailing of the minor things, such as the shape of the glass, and for some reason the doodling on the napkins was outright humorous for me. The ending was also quite quirky, bringing another chuckle to this most joyous of day. One of the reasons, I probably liked this much is because it maintained eloquence, while never stagnating in development, as you compartmentalized all the characteristics and constituent of the setting. Good.
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