[Adonis]

Read them each, wasn't going to vote but figure Might as well say something as I read them

Copy's verse lacked the depth both in rhyme structure and hilarity to garner the vote. I've only read a few pieces from him ever, and when I vote for him he has a killer concept, in this case, well, the opposite. I applaud the openness of the verse, even IF, you still found a way to keep the persona with the closer while slamming the opened emotion's door.

Black - Not much to say honestly. The verse, per usual, was simple to read coupled with strong grasp on flow. The story was cool, I'll be honest, I only read it once and could decipher it better but, since i'm honest, will not read it again, sorry. For what it it's worth, this verse on face value, as that is only way I can judge given my lack of readers focus as the moment, would have beat most of the verses this week, Line limit may have or may have not been the reason