[PancakeBrah]

He was insulting you. But Witty insults are like friendly punches on the shoulder from a long lost pal whilst drinking at the bar, so don't be mad.

Anyways, this was similar to your other Open Mic that I read that a lot of it was gibberish that I can't be bothered to parse out. I will say that this piece was the superior of the two. A bit more cohesive. Or maybe I enjoyed it more because your current writing weaknesses are less exposed in a shorter piece. Again, a lot of the wordplays and connections were weak. But the flow and rhymes were average, so that's a starting point.

Thanks.