Thread: WK11: CopyPat (7-3) vs. dead man (6-3) -- dead man wins 8-0
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Old 01-06-2015, 04:58 PM   #8
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Copy had a 13 syllable rhyme. ...idk if people even pay that much attention? EEither way that was cool...the wording in copys verse was very simple ans formuliac which lent the verse feeling forced. The ending was lols tho. Deadman had a dope piece with some solid one liners/half liners and transitions. That competitive first chunk was dope. Words

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