Split: The end of this verse summed everything up very well for me since three of my friends had kids during our senior year in high school. WTF HAPPENED TO THIS GENERATION!?....Ahem...Back to your piece. Very well written, not your best piece but still some great writing here. I loved the rebellious nature of the people in this trying to prove the former generation wrong while only fucking up even more imo. Nice writing I enjoyed this Split.
Juxtaposition: I have to agree with zygote on this one. The language made this piece very confusing. The first portion of this piece was well written but as the piece got further into it I felt it slowly just start to slip off. I really wanted to enjoy this piece as the first section was brilliant but as it progressed it was just boring to me tbh. No diss there of course as that's only my opinion.
All in all I gotta give this one to Split.
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