[dead man]

this feels like half a monologue opposing materialism and half of your own internal musings.

My morals reside,
Where normalcy dies

something like this. very inward.

your concept of the 'empty' mirror that contains nothing inherently but only what posits itself within the mirror was an interesting foundation. you built something that felt a bit shallow given the brevity of the verse. you touched on pretty basic ideals of what well associate with materialism and egoism and identity built on both. rolex, suit, liquor, etc.

you could have taken a few more liberties as far as describing this type of crisis. something more personal? less universal? i guess

thanks for the read, i guess PMing for feed is not a dead art. worked for you this time!

take care, ill be looking out