Patrick: I feel the feels, brah. When you rhyme errthing people want you to rhyme errthing errtime and gets erritating. fuck. With that being said, you should've rhymed more. DUH. Nah. But forreal. This was cool, just not as cool as I've seen from you before. You still went with the topic without trying and it flowed better than most people here can even write when they try. You da man, Pat. Boner Police 4 Life.
dead dude: This was groovy, man. Relationships are so odd. When they're written about well enough it becomes a very cool read. This was very well written. Loved the lines about the bourbon and vodka (cuz alcohol), and the settled for worse line was rad as fuck. Gave me the feels. You're cool, man. Real cool.
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