Arid, so i thought your verse was different from most writers
although I feel like the added touch you brought threw me off
I feel like your best pieces come when you let loose, this seemed forced
not in a way to make me say 'hey this all just doesn't add up' kind of way
it just feels like you were prepping up a resume when you dropped this
other than that I feel that given some time you'll come along as a great writer
which is a comment I rarely throw around, you sir are going places....
Certain, Nice choice for a topic, way better than what I'd expect from the quote
regardless you carried out a strong start with a continuous barrage of quotables
you strike me as some hermit that lives in his room studying encyclopedias & dictionary's
you always seem to surprise me with something new when I come across your work
which makes the reading worthwhile and the battles worth seeing...nice work
v/Certain, I feel like he's just ready to be at the top of the league again
his piece was more well rounded and carried more resonance for me in the end
nice battle fella's i enjoyed..
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