This was a great battle..
Zen, i feel like you adapted your verse perfectly to the subject
you brought out a broader aspect of the 'quote' and you rode with it
I'm digging how smooth it flowed together, and how you kept the pace just right
I know some people would be pissed over your over usage of one word
but fuck that you did good right here my dude, I feel like the vibe was great
nice work
Pent, I always enjoy your pieces when you decide to bring forth a conscious effort
and this was slick from beginning to end, I'm not quite sure of how you structure your pieces
but this one came off as a very strong piece that flowed very smoothly, nice work
I feel like your adaption to the topic was very emotional as well as introspective
nice read...
v/well this is going to be one of the tougher battles to vote on
but I feel the person who possessed the most strength here is the one who wrote from deeper perspectives..if you don't know you probably didn't read these
so I'm going to settle this by saying that Pent...Pent has got this one
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